1st version draft for Ex1


5:55 pm,” I took a peek at my mobile phone’s digital clock. “Five minutes left, and I am still three stops away from my destination!”
An important event awaits me when the clock strikes 6’o clock sharp. A candlelight dinner at in Marina Bay Sands with my sweetheart whom I have not seen since a year she left for her studies abroad.
I am definitely going to be late.” I thought furiously to myself, and wishing I had left home earlier – even 5 minutes earlier would have been good enough. My fingers began to fiddle with the train metal pole in an impatient and random manner. “If only the train could go faster…!”
As I mentally countdown to the minutes till 6, the familiar voice recording started playing through the crowded train.
Next stop, City Hall Inter…”
I knew what station was next even without the recording telling me so – it is probably something that one will automatically learned after riding through the same train line for the last 10 years. But something was amiss this time round. Why did the recording stopped halfway during its broadcast?
As sudden as I asked the question to myself, an almost too-clear of an answer was delivered in face value.
Teeeiii……
The sound of a now dead power source, which was then quickly followed by the absence of the usual running noise of the air conditional system. Total darkness blanketed the entirety of the train which had ceased movements.
Wha… what happened?”
Black-out? Train can black-out?!”
Mommy!!”
Voices filled with a mix of fear and anxiety erupted from all possible corners of the train. I merely stood among the voices of the people I could not see; not knowing what to do myself. My mind could only thought of the much awaited dinner that awaits me outside the doors of the train that I was now stuck desperately within. I took some time to process and make sense out of the sudden turn of events.
The emergency back-up lights, as dim as they were, were now activated. And this made things even clearer – we were facing a real emergency incident. Something that has never happened for as long as 24 years in Singapore history, and I am freaking caught in it!
So hard to breathe…”
Indeed, I could feel the air getting heavier, as well as my breathing. But that was to be expected, with hundreds of us passengers being entrapped in a closed area with barely any ventilation. We need to evacuate quick, or risk getting suffocated. However, what could we do except wait for outside help to come?
CRASH!!
The noise of what sounded like the shattering of glass. Has help arrived?
No… Someone had instead decided to use an on-board fire extinguisher to smash a glass panel of the train’s door. I don’t know who that was, but I… no, we probably felt grateful for such an action, as rash as it may be, for it help ease our discomfort even if a little.
I don’t know how much time had passed since then, but eventually the train staff reached us and led everyone out of the halted train. Of course, the whole lot of us had to still make our way through the train tunnels on foot to reach the outside, but I was not bothered by this. All it matters that I was finally out and free.
A crowd of people flooded through the exit passage, and just when I thought my crisis was over, an all too familiar vibration shook through the inner walls of my jeans pockets. I was so caught up with the entire ordeal that I have not taken the time to use my phone earlier.
And at that very moment I knew what other trouble was awaiting me.

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